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06-27-2014, 09:57 PM
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Emotional filler riddled this piece. Some of it spoke with a tonal sobriquet that inundated the prime pinnacle of its overall scene. The ending was a bit cliche for my taste, but the writing was up to par. It got to the point really well.
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