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06-26-2014, 12:33 PM
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This had a nice poetic feel to it, I like your multi-syllabic rhymes and how they didn't seem forced at any point. Metaphors were cool, I like the repeating of the simile 'suffix' thought that was nice repetition. Overall, this was a nice read. hope to read more from you.
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