Week 16 championship: zygote (12-3) vs. Certain (5-4) \\ zygote wins 7-1

Adonis · 06-14-2014, 10:59 AM

Two good reads. This is easy as shit to vote on because you went with a fairly similar route. I Enjoyed one more then the other. Certain. You had high momements, and some OK imagery even if you didn't go into detail with the flood or the aftermath, you painted just enough that I could envision it. Still, I'd like more Imagery in a verse then not. Zyogte, you went all in with your flow IMO. The message to, as always, was very strong. I don't have any real complaints for either of you, maybe I felt like Cert, you had a simpilar scheme then usual which I didn't enjoy because it seemed almost too easy.

Overall, I have to give this to Ziggie, after reading both his just simply stuck with me stronger and gave me the greater satisfaction.

06-14-2014, 10:59 AM	#5
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Two good reads. This is easy as shit to vote on because you went with a fairly similar route. I Enjoyed one more then the other. Certain. You had high momements, and some OK imagery even if you didn't go into detail with the flood or the aftermath, you painted just enough that I could envision it. Still, I'd like more Imagery in a verse then not. Zyogte, you went all in with your flow IMO. The message to, as always, was very strong. I don't have any real complaints for either of you, maybe I felt like Cert, you had a simpilar scheme then usual which I didn't enjoy because it seemed almost too easy. Overall, I have to give this to Ziggie, after reading both his just simply stuck with me stronger and gave me the greater satisfaction. __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR