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06-08-2014, 01:59 PM
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ExSol Meets HolyIsh
Join Date: Apr 2014
Location: IRL
Posts: 148
Battle Record: 4-2
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Overall: Zenland. Felt his had more depth and more consistent use of imagery. Also, the wording on his multies was a lot cleaner and they worked for the most part. As far as topic goes, I appreciated them both equally. I felt both struggled with bringing the reader into their verses. Zen due to a lack of backdrop and cohesion between concept and verse and King due to it being very general and lacking specifics.
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