Week 15: patrown (2-3) vs. Bladed Thesis (2-0) \\ Bladed Thesis wins 4-3

zygote · 06-08-2014, 06:09 AM

BT multiple rhyming was a lot better than patrowns. Patrown's plot line was excellent though, very well executed and coherent story. Nothing crazily ambitious but enough to create some engagement, the tone/writing language choices were effective in creating the atmosphere, and it set up the great ending. BT had a good descriptive story but it didn't progress much, aliens were interesting and good effort at putting aspects of the Egyptian culture onto The Overlord etc, but in comparison the story lacked the progression and strong ending that Patrown's had. Voting for Patrown.

06-08-2014, 06:09 AM	#7
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	BT multiple rhyming was a lot better than patrowns. Patrown's plot line was excellent though, very well executed and coherent story. Nothing crazily ambitious but enough to create some engagement, the tone/writing language choices were effective in creating the atmosphere, and it set up the great ending. BT had a good descriptive story but it didn't progress much, aliens were interesting and good effort at putting aspects of the Egyptian culture onto The Overlord etc, but in comparison the story lacked the progression and strong ending that Patrown's had. Voting for Patrown.