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06-04-2014, 09:20 AM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
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nice feed dull boy really insightful wow
it seems to me that you focused more on a context of writing rather than the flashes of a hybrid like writing focused primarily on syllable count - which is good. lots of writers focus on what words will fit perfectly while obliging to their rhyme set ups, when it should be the other way around. although difficult, the process will become much easier when writing in the future and churn out better concepts and imagery - but nobody wants to spend time to get better 'cause theyve done well so far' which is why u get shit stagnancy from just a handful of writers, thousands. cuz, ego. anyway! i liked this, it wasnt as structured as your others so to say, but its structural integrity lays in the grit of imagery and the words used. gj lil oatsie
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