raw vs. sublime [Sublime WINS]

05-30-2014, 08:52 AM

think you nicer than me? it's the other around, you fuckin trick bastard
check his name. anyone thinkin' his words are raw has got that shit backward

Wack but your best attempt, tbh.

vs

i'd instruct ya to become a winner.. follow a G, nobody has to tell me..
but if nc 'lettuce the subway'.. we'd just classify this fruit as a BLT

What does this even mean? And how is it a punch? Please elaborate.

even? no shame to odds but pleeease.. this boy is even lame to God
coz the chances of him getting rank 4/10's .. lies in the looks of the average broad!

Not sure what you're talkin about, again tbh.

perv. find a job, real shit herb u couldnt blossom raised in a flower batch..
coz ill break lime's "limb in (lemon) thru his mouth" til the kid resembles a sour patch!

Super forced. LEM-IN sounds nothing like LIMB.

your lines make me laugh & shit.. peep the scene, hoes? no, u cant grasp a chick
me?! i smack a bitch! yours? 'i stick her (sticker) in every hole' .. u barely scratch n sniff!

Simple but your best attempt, yet.

i bust bars, target practice site... a submarine? ha! i doubt he the deadliest, type?!
chances are, he's fishin for a shark but instead the 'boy caught ah L' like medicated lesbian heists!

Simile is horrible, boycott.boy caught wordplays are played as well.

v/ Not sure at the moment, both verses were pretty weak/bad. I'll return to edit in a WINNER, shortly.

05-30-2014, 08:52 AM	#1
Sicc Guest Posts: n/a	think you nicer than me? it's the other around, you fuckin trick bastard check his name. anyone thinkin' his words are raw has got that shit backward Wack but your best attempt, tbh. vs i'd instruct ya to become a winner.. follow a G, nobody has to tell me.. but if nc 'lettuce the subway'.. we'd just classify this fruit as a BLT What does this even mean? And how is it a punch? Please elaborate. even? no shame to odds but pleeease.. this boy is even lame to God coz the chances of him getting rank 4/10's .. lies in the looks of the average broad! Not sure what you're talkin about, again tbh. perv. find a job, real shit herb u couldnt blossom raised in a flower batch.. coz ill break lime's "limb in (lemon) thru his mouth" til the kid resembles a sour patch! Super forced. LEM-IN sounds nothing like LIMB. your lines make me laugh & shit.. peep the scene, hoes? no, u cant grasp a chick me?! i smack a bitch! yours? 'i stick her (sticker) in every hole' .. u barely scratch n sniff! Simple but your best attempt, yet. i bust bars, target practice site... a submarine? ha! i doubt he the deadliest, type?! chances are, he's fishin for a shark but instead the 'boy caught ah L' like medicated lesbian heists! Simile is horrible, boycott.boy caught wordplays are played as well. v/ Not sure at the moment, both verses were pretty weak/bad. I'll return to edit in a WINNER, shortly.