Week 13: 7. zygote (9-3) vs. 8. Soulstice (1-3) \\ zygote wins 4-3

Frank · 05-26-2014, 01:06 AM

Zygote - Battle rap 12. You stepped it up again with a benevolent use of modern English. Lots of interesting words are on display here backed up by a strong sense of flow. Appears You took your time with this particular piece and it paid off for me. I really enjoyed a some of the visuals. Although the Long goodbye seemed strictly aesthetic, it is still quite the concept in itself.

Soulstice - Your writing is mystic like. You write from the ancient topicalist mindstate, a scroll and feather type of story teller, your work is always alluring. 'The sky goes boom as the castle meets the horizon' is one of the best pure lines I've had the hhonour of reading all season long. It's really a shame you werent more involved this season. You are just now beginning to hit your stride and shake the cobwebs.

Voting Zygote

Good battle

05-26-2014, 01:06 AM	#1
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Zygote - Battle rap 12. You stepped it up again with a benevolent use of modern English. Lots of interesting words are on display here backed up by a strong sense of flow. Appears You took your time with this particular piece and it paid off for me. I really enjoyed a some of the visuals. Although the Long goodbye seemed strictly aesthetic, it is still quite the concept in itself. Soulstice - Your writing is mystic like. You write from the ancient topicalist mindstate, a scroll and feather type of story teller, your work is always alluring. 'The sky goes boom as the castle meets the horizon' is one of the best pure lines I've had the hhonour of reading all season long. It's really a shame you werent more involved this season. You are just now beginning to hit your stride and shake the cobwebs. Voting Zygote Good battle __________________ *VETWORK*