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05-19-2014, 02:01 AM
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Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
Posts: 708
Battle Record: 13-10
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ur sick. ur slowly but surely evolving and getting deeper. ur losing me. or maybe i'm losing you?!?!?! ur getting more legit as a writer and less rapper-y. i think dull and dead will approve. theyre prob ur faves no? ur becoming them, but grittier. pretty soon we'll hate eachother.. sorry in advance.
ur welcome for the awesome feed now get aim already
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05-22-2014, 07:13 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,868
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Grimy piece, honest to the bone. Love the flow/rhyme scheme as well. Read through it easily and enjoyed it. Cool shit.
This stuck with me tho': ''Want to know what an illusion is? Strung out on loose leaf trips. Never show you the real me'' ^ Nice!
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