Week 12: 9. zygote (8-3) vs. 10. Vividlyvague (6-4) \\ zygote wins 6-0

King Ra. · 05-19-2014, 12:31 AM

Zyg, you've been rolling, especially the past couple weeks. This week, no exception. A humorous take on the image. Rhymes were on point as was the content. Very creative approach and it worked well here. No major qualms with your piece. Vivid, I'm pretty shocked. Im used to reading very detailed narratives from you but you went the topical route this week. Not saying this was bad, it was written well. But it feels very dry though. I thought there were some strong phrasing and the ending was a nice conclusion but it really lacks much depth. I feel you maybe didn't have any complete idea to gow ith the image, and just decided to go a basic route, which is something we definitely are not accustomed to when reading your work.

The decision is pretty clear here. I felt Vivid didn't really put a complete effort in this match up, and his piece didn't pack that extra kick like it usually does. Zyg dropped one of the better pieces this week, a creative and humorous piece and that gives him my vote in this one.

MVGT: Zygote. Good job by both competitors.

05-19-2014, 12:31 AM	#9
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Zyg, you've been rolling, especially the past couple weeks. This week, no exception. A humorous take on the image. Rhymes were on point as was the content. Very creative approach and it worked well here. No major qualms with your piece. Vivid, I'm pretty shocked. Im used to reading very detailed narratives from you but you went the topical route this week. Not saying this was bad, it was written well. But it feels very dry though. I thought there were some strong phrasing and the ending was a nice conclusion but it really lacks much depth. I feel you maybe didn't have any complete idea to gow ith the image, and just decided to go a basic route, which is something we definitely are not accustomed to when reading your work. The decision is pretty clear here. I felt Vivid didn't really put a complete effort in this match up, and his piece didn't pack that extra kick like it usually does. Zyg dropped one of the better pieces this week, a creative and humorous piece and that gives him my vote in this one. MVGT: Zygote. Good job by both competitors. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.