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Old 03-22-2013, 01:28 AM   #1
Sharp
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: PA
Posts: 11,592
Battle Record: 56-21

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Originally Posted by Witty View Post
No more games, no more bullshit.

RIP



^ I know this shit damaged his pride, he panicked, got frantic and cried..saddened inside
Now THESE voters will pan him like cake, when I leave him battered, flattened, and fried.
more technical than anything, still a decent hit
Got straight killed and didn't say shit, a dude push me I'm a lion, a bully, I'm mauling him
But I know Mac might revive, cuz this cat got nine lives, n he's a pussy in all of 'em
alright, kinda played concept but well worded
Two Macs on this site, I find it hard to tell the difference, got a problem kid? sue me
Because one of 'ems a straight up hoe, bitch ass lil girl, n the other has big boobies
lol
Shit's true, b...I know you're mad and insane, ur bad temper has u stabbing the page
Ur anger problems ain't no secret bro, we all saw you lose your battle with Rayge
kinda played
A battling Mac like Ill, and he's Latin American like you...this coincidence is scary
U shud battle with Thesaurus too...along with spell check, and an English Dictionary
lol
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you're more of an asshole than smart. you'll never hit a spot
you dont deserve to be called Witty, barely Clever & worse IQ than that bot
didnt really hit, plus the refernce to cleverbot is a little obscured so a lot of folks may not get it
stop bitching people Witty, accept that they'll never peep you
you're not just addict with the wolfs, you even asslick like they do
okay idea, but the excecution was a little lacking, particularly the setup
you have a life n friends, and that's a lie you can't hold
so if we see Witty matching with others.. prolly CPU controlled
okay hit, probably your best bar
AOB n RIA must be your home. this one mostly, RIA's filled with ghosts
your house is flooding, Witty, i mean your flooding it with your shitty posts
I like the idea here but it seems difficult to pull off. didnt really work
you're a skinny guy, you can't even twist a plastic valve
not to mention your face, the way i'll wreck-it you'd think my name is Ralph
a little simple, not too easy of a flip to pull off anyway
You could benefit a lot from doing more than one-syllable rhymes and making a stronger connection between some of your setups and punchlines to really highlight those concepts you're bringing.

Give this one to Witty, his opener, mac, and thesaurus lines were the better lines of the battle and pretty funny. keep at it guys, nice battle
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