I'll Be Okay

Mitch · 05-10-2014, 06:21 PM

Wicked and flaming,
Sickly untamed.
Pitch me a drink.
I'll be okay.
I'm not alone.

Wicker and human.
Sickly and Truman.
Pinch me, i'm drooling.
I'll be cooler.
I'm not alone.

I'm all alone.
I'm half empty.
I'm calling you home.
I'm that empty.

I'm all alone.
I'm half tempting.
I'm calling your phone.
I'm that emcee.

I'm not alone.
Sick of the games.
Pitch for the flames.

Sick of the words
Pitch me your curves.
I'll be okay.

Wicks too slow
Sickly adored.
Pinch me a score.
I'll be reborn.
I'm not okay.

I'm all alone.
I'm half tempting.
I'm calling you out.
I'm that empty.

DexLabb · 05-10-2014, 06:26 PM

you mentioned being "that emcee" so correct me if im wrong but you wanna rap? if so, the last thing you should be doing is this scripture stuff...try something more main stream. i know this is completely against the grain, but thats why its the truth

Mitch · 05-10-2014, 06:32 PM

Dex chill there are many different styles to rap, i'm not going to stay trapped in whatever box you define 'rap' is, but if you have some constructive feed, feel free to post that and i'll take it serious.

Witty · 05-10-2014, 06:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DexLabb

you mentioned being "that emcee" so correct me if im wrong but you wanna rap? if so, the last thing you should be doing is this scripture stuff...try something more main stream. i know this is completely against the grain, but thats why its the truth

lol @ telling him to go mainstream and then say i know this is completely against the grain.

I lol'd irl.

Split · 05-10-2014, 06:56 PM

good shit man. practicing keeping your stuff constrained, simple, straightforward every once in awhile allows you to come across with wayy more complex ideas that readers/ listeners will actually pick up on.

DexLabb · 05-10-2014, 07:40 PM

your telling this guy this shit was good? holy fuck your world is upside down. witty against the grain of this forum. cause this forum will turn you into a troll that writes on scrolls and masterbates to egyptian gods. of course its against the grain. u dudes are brainwashed into thinking you write dope shit. u write garbage

Split · 05-10-2014, 07:45 PM

at least its our garbage. how is sniffing the dick tissues of every rapper that was moderately close to making it brah? no one here tryna rap lol dumbass lol

DexLabb · 05-10-2014, 07:46 PM

your garbage? like you have strength in numbers from being wack? thats like a bunch of mongoloids going "at least were sexy together." just dosent make sense, your a dumb ass

Split · 05-10-2014, 07:50 PM

Hm. I guess I've never looked at it like that. This has been a productive and enjoyable exchange of ideas. Thanks man.

Fig · 05-10-2014, 07:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DexLabb

your garbage? like you have strength in numbers from being wack? thats like a bunch of mongoloids going "at least were sexy together." just dosent make sense, your a dumb ass

You know, I see your side of things now. I was wrong before. I apologize.

Witty · 05-10-2014, 07:57 PM

@DexLabb

That was a compelling argument.

You are right.

DexLabb · 05-10-2014, 07:58 PM

the trolls man

Witty · 05-10-2014, 08:07 PM

Dex ducks desperately departing depressed during dangerous digressive discursions dictating doomed desires.

DexLabb · 05-10-2014, 08:12 PM

alright that was impressive maybe you should write an audio book

Witty · 05-10-2014, 08:13 PM

I WILL THANK YOU.

05-10-2014, 06:21 PM	#1
Mitch Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Canada Posts: 160 Rep Power: 2208351	I'll Be Okay Wicked and flaming, Sickly untamed. Pitch me a drink. I'll be okay. I'm not alone. Wicker and human. Sickly and Truman. Pinch me, i'm drooling. I'll be cooler. I'm not alone. I'm all alone. I'm half empty. I'm calling you home. I'm that empty. I'm all alone. I'm half tempting. I'm calling your phone. I'm that emcee. I'm not alone. Sick of the games. Pitch for the flames. Sick of the words Pitch me your curves. I'll be okay. Wicks too slow Sickly adored. Pinch me a score. I'll be reborn. I'm not okay. I'm all alone. I'm half tempting. I'm calling you out. I'm that empty. __________________ Soundcloud.com/TheDirtySerpent

05-10-2014, 06:26 PM	#2
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	you mentioned being "that emcee" so correct me if im wrong but you wanna rap? if so, the last thing you should be doing is this scripture stuff...try something more main stream. i know this is completely against the grain, but thats why its the truth __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

05-10-2014, 06:32 PM	#3
Mitch Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Canada Posts: 160 Rep Power: 2208351	Dex chill there are many different styles to rap, i'm not going to stay trapped in whatever box you define 'rap' is, but if you have some constructive feed, feel free to post that and i'll take it serious. __________________ Soundcloud.com/TheDirtySerpent

05-10-2014, 06:56 PM	#5
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	good shit man. practicing keeping your stuff constrained, simple, straightforward every once in awhile allows you to come across with wayy more complex ideas that readers/ listeners will actually pick up on. __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

05-10-2014, 07:40 PM	#6
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	your telling this guy this shit was good? holy fuck your world is upside down. witty against the grain of this forum. cause this forum will turn you into a troll that writes on scrolls and masterbates to egyptian gods. of course its against the grain. u dudes are brainwashed into thinking you write dope shit. u write garbage __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

05-10-2014, 07:45 PM	#7
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	at least its our garbage. how is sniffing the dick tissues of every rapper that was moderately close to making it brah? no one here tryna rap lol dumbass lol __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

05-10-2014, 07:46 PM	#8
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	your garbage? like you have strength in numbers from being wack? thats like a bunch of mongoloids going "at least were sexy together." just dosent make sense, your a dumb ass __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

05-10-2014, 07:50 PM	#9
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	Hm. I guess I've never looked at it like that. This has been a productive and enjoyable exchange of ideas. Thanks man. __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

05-10-2014, 07:57 PM	#11
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	@DexLabb That was a compelling argument. You are right. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

05-10-2014, 07:58 PM	#12
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	the trolls man __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

05-10-2014, 08:07 PM	#13
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Dex ducks desperately departing depressed during dangerous digressive discursions dictating doomed desires. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

05-10-2014, 08:12 PM	#14
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	alright that was impressive maybe you should write an audio book __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

05-10-2014, 08:13 PM	#15
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	I WILL THANK YOU. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.