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Old 05-04-2014, 02:56 PM   #361
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Just got outta church. What should be my first sin of the afternoon?
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Old 05-04-2014, 06:52 PM   #365
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cut off your dick and jump off a bridge. not sure what sin category that falls into, but I'm pretty sure it is one.
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cut off your dick and jump off a bridge. not sure what sin category that falls into, but I'm pretty sure it is one.
If I ever lost my highly sought after appendage I would indeed kill myself. Quality of life oats. Quality of life.
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Old 05-04-2014, 08:52 PM   #367
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Old 05-04-2014, 09:17 PM   #368
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if I'm not mistaken, I believe they are currently tied.
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Old 05-04-2014, 11:49 PM   #369
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Old 05-04-2014, 11:58 PM   #370
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I think it's time to rethink my style. The voter's are right, this whole narrative storytelling is only getting menso far. I will venture out this next week. Good match @Zombie
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Old 05-05-2014, 12:07 AM   #371
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I think it's time to rethink my style. The voter's are right, this whole narrative storytelling is only getting menso far. I will venture out this next week. Good match @Zombie
I consider this a win in my record, and a loss in yours

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Old 05-05-2014, 12:10 AM   #372
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I think it's time to rethink my style. The voter's are right, this whole narrative storytelling is only getting menso far. I will venture out this next week. Good match @Zombie
I disagree, though I know you've been considering a style change for a while. The thing is that your style puts a lot of strain on the content of the verse. When you come up with a great approach and story like you did against El Pancake, your style is so reader-friendly and approachable that you absolutely can beat anyone.

zygote has a similar issue, where he has to come up with great approaches and interesting content every week but can beat anyone because he's so good at it.
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@Certain, I feel you. Maybe i just need to add some more flare or different aspects to it. Thanks for the kind words though. I mean im not salty at all, I could care less about the win or loss cause it was a great match and I know ive only been really writing for about a year. I just want to do whatever I can to improve. Ill dig deep for next week.
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I think it is good to rethink your style for every verse you write. form follows function
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If I ever battle zygote, I'm going to stay up and write my verse before he can.
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It will mind fuck you into a tiny, infant kitten that can't help but cuddle itself.

It will sway you to write an accommodating verse that yields itself to It's stun gun affect
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