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david stern razor burns · 05-03-2014, 08:43 PM

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05-03-2014, 08:43 PM	#1
david stern razor burns with razor spurs Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: At David Blaine's favorite place with David Spade and Macy Gray Posts: 87 Rep Power: 3750190	Outstanding really. Obviously, yes, the content is sad but the way that you put this together was impressive. I'm sure this can hit home with almost anyone at some point. The flow was up to your regular immaculate standards. But the wording is what made this stand out to me. Not the vocab, but just how it all came together, and how you constructed the writing. It just seemed so down do earth and real, this was not contrived at all, you made it extremely relate-able. I feel like you manged to put into words what alot of us have all thought at some point or another. Very well done sir.