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Intense. Loved Pen's take. Oats take was intense. But I feel it veered off from his (my opinion) championship clinching verse of last week. It had elements that I think may been loosely translated from writer to reader. Pen delivered a common theme, but had a ball knit very compactly. Good use of thematic language in both, especially oats. Voting Pen.
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