Week 10: 13. Vividlyvague (5-3) vs. 14. Johnathan Mercy (1-1) \\ Vividlyvague wins 6-4

Zombie · 05-03-2014, 03:09 AM

Impressed by the brevity of Johnathan here and the ability to entail such detail with literally less words than I'm about to write for this vote. VV had a proper story and all that, and requested a story, which he didn't need. I think he delivered a good verse, but the dialogue was a bit much. The double quoted take JM took was impressive. Personified the use of language and made it his own. VV had a lot going on, and was harder to follow. IT pains me to think that I believe JM's verse is better, due to brevity, but I truly think he delivered a short - but masterful take on the topic that just lit my ribbons up. V/JM.

05-03-2014, 03:09 AM	#5
Zombie Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 125 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 2645340	Impressed by the brevity of Johnathan here and the ability to entail such detail with literally less words than I'm about to write for this vote. VV had a proper story and all that, and requested a story, which he didn't need. I think he delivered a good verse, but the dialogue was a bit much. The double quoted take JM took was impressive. Personified the use of language and made it his own. VV had a lot going on, and was harder to follow. IT pains me to think that I believe JM's verse is better, due to brevity, but I truly think he delivered a short - but masterful take on the topic that just lit my ribbons up. V/JM.