performed last night for the first time in a long while

oats · 05-02-2014, 12:42 PM

dull boy · 05-02-2014, 12:57 PM

This makes me never want to read anything in public, ever. Nothing against you, but all that lyrical dexterity and skill is largely lost on a crowd.

This was really good, Oats.

Vulgar · 05-02-2014, 12:59 PM

What kind of stuff do other people perform there? Ya did good.

oats · 05-02-2014, 01:29 PM

Appreciate it. It's almost entirely spoken word style. A few people play instruments and sing. Nobody else really rhymes.

dull boy · 05-02-2014, 01:55 PM

Maybe slow down the delivery.

Certain · 05-02-2014, 01:57 PM

@uh-oh

StarFaggot · 05-02-2014, 02:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by oats

This was good.

Seems way late in the night though nobody want to decipher

Fig · 05-02-2014, 02:28 PM

So dope

oats · 05-02-2014, 02:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dull boy

Maybe slow down the delivery.

In the past I slowed it down and didn't enjoy the performance of it as much. I always score particularly low with the judges anyway so I'd rather spit in a more fun way.

@Aero shit was 11:00 by the time I got up. I was super tired, along with who was left of the audience.

El Muffin · 05-02-2014, 04:35 PM

Heyyyyy

This was cool. Props

Oats with the crowd participation

Who goes to work tmrw?

WOOOOOOOOO -OBLIVIOUS DRUNK CHIC

oats · 05-03-2014, 01:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Muff

Heyyyyy

This was cool. Props

Oats with the crowd participation

Who goes to work tmrw?

WOOOOOOOOO -OBLIVIOUS DRUNK CHIC

lol I didn't even notice that chick until now

Eŋg · 05-03-2014, 01:22 AM

ah, man. someday i'll do this.

remember reading this thinking you killed it, esp. the first section.

you delivered it dope too. poised.

we live in a beautiful world.

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dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	This makes me never want to read anything in public, ever. Nothing against you, but all that lyrical dexterity and skill is largely lost on a crowd. This was really good, Oats. Last edited by dull boy; 05-02-2014 at 01:29 PM.

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oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	Appreciate it. It's almost entirely spoken word style. A few people play instruments and sing. Nobody else really rhymes. __________________ You should be water

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Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	So dope __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

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dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	Maybe slow down the delivery.

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Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	ah, man. someday i'll do this. remember reading this thinking you killed it, esp. the first section. you delivered it dope too. poised. we live in a beautiful world.