Netcees  

Go Back   Netcees > Forum > Open Mic Section
Register FAQ Community Calendar Today's Posts Search

User Tag List

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 04-26-2014, 10:37 PM   #1
Neighbor
Genghis Khan Vuitton
 
Neighbor's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,303
Battle Record: 30-10

Accomplishments
- Hall of Fame

Champed
- Pic Key Grand Prix
- 1-2 Season 1
- Newbie Tournament II
- Fight Night LXII
- Fight Night XLII
- Fight Night XXXIII
- Fight Night XXVI
- BA Swag & Flow
- 1-2 Punch League (2x)
- Netcees Battle League(2x)
- BA Slugfest II
- Fight Night of Champions
- Fight Night LXXXIII
- Summer Classic X

Rep Power: 34764471
Neighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant future
Default Ric Flair

This a cutthroat symphony; gun smoke & infamy. Rip your guts open, literally... I keep the pump holstered religiously. Love don't exist to me; a young soldier's blood oath epiphany. My lungs hold slugs that unload limitlessly w/ snubnose trajectory. While you couldn't afford a shot glass, I'm pourin cognac w/ foreign contacts in Beijing. It's mortal combat, my blade swing & your fuckin corpse'll frog splash the HD. When I'm gauge grippin, I break limits... frames split from reality. Clay pigeon ya family. My stage presence like Rain's finisher, transitioned into a game-ending Fatality. The lyrics're God status, this shit lookin like America's Got Talent. Shut down the system like a heroin shot, y'all hear what you want; I'm here to tear up ya HOF ballots. You're terrible, off balance; they're preparin the pall-bearers. This an aerial assault blasting like Barrett w/ arm calibers. Still that Type O negative psycho terrorist. Bioweaponsmith w/ the rhinestone leather grip. Cyclone crescent kick, battle rap not even Zygote's pen could script. Got lines like Pete Carroll spliced w/ Green Arrow in an Ivy League flannel. Cut w/ Bison's genes, on a Sniper Spree; splatter blood. Fightin me's like tryna weave Tiger Knees, standin up into Iron Sheik's Camel Clutch. Or standing w/ Klitschko in the staggering grip of Anderson's clinch hold. Got box control like a classic Nintendo that'll shatter your ribs in a massive crescendo. My swag lives forever, keep the mask & Beretta w/ a flask full'a Devil's Cut. Plus, the strap where the weapon's hung got more rounds than Allen from Metal Slug. The sawed-off I'm grippin launchin intestines on the walls of ya kitchen. Flawless precision. I should be locked in a prison like Auschwitz victims, no Shawshank Redemption. Or double entendres; I'm a fuckin monstrosity. Get off-topic, my thought process gave Jungian philosophy a frontal lobotomy.
__________________
Even signing my autograph’s like writing a slaughter pact

Last edited by Neighbor; 04-26-2014 at 10:51 PM.
Neighbor is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2014, 10:47 PM   #2
Frank
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2001
Posts: 3,228



Champed
- NWL Season 2
- Art of Writing League (5x)
- Lime Green Poetry Association
- AOWL Season 6
- AOWL Season 10

Rep Power: 3853347
Frank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant future
Default

Daps
__________________
VETWORK

Last edited by Frank; 04-26-2014 at 10:49 PM.
Frank is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2014, 11:01 PM   #3
CopyPat
Mic Check
 
CopyPat's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
Posts: 708
Battle Record: 13-10



Rep Power: 3742225
CopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to CopyPat
Default

I'm outta breath just reading this. shit was that intense. holy. neigh adding a little more slantz to ur steez, i like that. not so perfect with the syllables and rhymes, i been doing that a little too, its cooler i think, haha. reads more interestingly at the very least. dopeness bud, pretty classic neigh spit, except slammed into a paragraph. y the fuck havent we collabd yet, duh..the long awaited
__________________
My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.
CopyPat is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2014, 11:09 PM   #4
Wise Wiggles
nok Su kow
 
Wise Wiggles's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,505
Battle Record: 1-1



Rep Power: 51788022
Wise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant futureWise Wiggles has a brilliant future
Default

magical
__________________
"black as midnight..black as pitch
blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"
Wise Wiggles is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2014, 11:11 PM   #5
El Muffin
DOHpe since 02'
 
El Muffin's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Surrounded by white ppl
Posts: 14,690
Battle Record: 43-24


Champed
- Netcees Battle League
- 1-2 Punch Onslaught
- 1-2 Punch League
- Hot or Thot Roast
- Hot or Thot 2018
- Fight Night 11
- NPL Roast

Rep Power: 34230535
El Muffin has a brilliant futureEl Muffin has a brilliant futureEl Muffin has a brilliant futureEl Muffin has a brilliant futureEl Muffin has a brilliant futureEl Muffin has a brilliant futureEl Muffin has a brilliant futureEl Muffin has a brilliant futureEl Muffin has a brilliant futureEl Muffin has a brilliant futureEl Muffin has a brilliant future
Default

this was chock full.of semi obscure references..n lord knows ima fan of.those

digging the lines culminating in the metal slug ref.

and that closer was just redic

as a whole the piece didnt read as smoothly as expected but the content eclipses w.e gripes i have

good read.would.quote but.
gayphone
__________________
It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you
Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople
El Muffin is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2014, 11:29 PM   #6
Ghost1
Senior Member
 
Ghost1's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2014
Posts: 26,334
Battle Record: 0-1



Rep Power: 84181445
Ghost1 has a brilliant futureGhost1 has a brilliant futureGhost1 has a brilliant futureGhost1 has a brilliant futureGhost1 has a brilliant futureGhost1 has a brilliant futureGhost1 has a brilliant futureGhost1 has a brilliant futureGhost1 has a brilliant futureGhost1 has a brilliant futureGhost1 has a brilliant future
Default

Fire
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by DMS View Post
My dad once had like 4 beers at a family reunion, and drove us home better than my mom usually drives.
Not saying being drunk doesn’t mess up you reasoning. I’m turning 20 soon so I haven’t had a drink ever.
Ghost1 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2014, 11:43 PM   #7
big baby
obsessed
 
big baby's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1

Accomplishments
- can recite entirety of shrek 2

Champed
- tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek

Rep Power: 8599682
big baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to big baby
Default

Opening lines were great. Didnt finish reading, just wanted to say, I'm glad you wrote in this format. I might do something like this just to show you. Just kidding. You're my dude. I like the zygote diss.
__________________
precision defender
Quote:
Originally Posted by greed View Post
If mentioned in a discussion its who'd still use wordy lines and act all dope
Then again hes had this schtick so long he like bb da bb da bb thats all folks
big baby is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2014, 11:46 PM   #8
Neighbor
Genghis Khan Vuitton
 
Neighbor's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,303
Battle Record: 30-10

Accomplishments
- Hall of Fame

Champed
- Pic Key Grand Prix
- 1-2 Season 1
- Newbie Tournament II
- Fight Night LXII
- Fight Night XLII
- Fight Night XXXIII
- Fight Night XXVI
- BA Swag & Flow
- 1-2 Punch League (2x)
- Netcees Battle League(2x)
- BA Slugfest II
- Fight Night of Champions
- Fight Night LXXXIII
- Summer Classic X

Rep Power: 34764471
Neighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant future
Default

Wasn't a diss lol

Zy's dope

Appreciate the feed
__________________
Even signing my autograph’s like writing a slaughter pact
Neighbor is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2014, 11:53 PM   #9
big baby
obsessed
 
big baby's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1

Accomplishments
- can recite entirety of shrek 2

Champed
- tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek

Rep Power: 8599682
big baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant futurebig baby has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to big baby
Default

I LIKE THE FUCKING ZYGOTE DISS.
__________________
precision defender
Quote:
Originally Posted by greed View Post
If mentioned in a discussion its who'd still use wordy lines and act all dope
Then again hes had this schtick so long he like bb da bb da bb thats all folks
big baby is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2014, 11:59 PM   #10
dead man
living
 
dead man's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,485
Battle Record: 33-18

Accomplishments
- Hall of Fame

Champed
- AOWL Season 1
- Art of Writing League
- AOWL Season 4
- Write Week V
- GWL Season 1

Rep Power: 77606679
dead man has a brilliant futuredead man has a brilliant futuredead man has a brilliant futuredead man has a brilliant futuredead man has a brilliant futuredead man has a brilliant futuredead man has a brilliant futuredead man has a brilliant futuredead man has a brilliant futuredead man has a brilliant futuredead man has a brilliant future
Default

Clay pigeon ya family. My stage presence like Rain's finisher, transitioned into a game-ending Fatality.

Cyclone crescent kick, battle rap not even Zygote's pen could script.

Fightin me's like tryna weave Tiger Knees, standin up into Iron Sheik's Camel Clutch. Or standing w/ Klitschko in the staggering grip of Anderson's clinch hold. Got box control like a classic Nintendo that'll shatter your ribs in a massive crescendo. My swag lives forever, keep the mask & Beretta w/ a flask full'a Devil's Cut.

my thought process gave Jungian philosophy a frontal lobotomy.



woof. probably one of your best yet. i actually had skimmed it until i hit that last line and it was the reason i decided to re-read closely and really discover the gemstones above.

really ridiculous rhyme-work
__________________
Zack Wicks for president
dead man is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-27-2014, 12:46 AM   #11
Paradigm
___________
 
Join Date: Apr 2013
Location: California
Posts: 1,989
Battle Record: 4-4


Champed
- The Ultimate Textcee
- NBL Cypher

Rep Power: 11033512
Paradigm has a brilliant futureParadigm has a brilliant futureParadigm has a brilliant futureParadigm has a brilliant futureParadigm has a brilliant futureParadigm has a brilliant futureParadigm has a brilliant futureParadigm has a brilliant futureParadigm has a brilliant futureParadigm has a brilliant futureParadigm has a brilliant future
Default

LOL that metal slug line was dope

rest was sick
Paradigm is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-27-2014, 04:52 AM   #12
Dominate
Tread Lightly.
 
Dominate's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 2,534
Battle Record: 26-9


Champed
- Netcees Battle League
- Battle Arena
- Tag Team Tournament III
- Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant"

Rep Power: 18197460
Dominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant futureDominate has a brilliant future
Default

Fire bro

Write more
__________________
The Bad Guys
Dominate is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-27-2014, 05:34 AM   #13
Baron Mynd
PROVEN BITER
 
Baron Mynd's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Location: Wolverhampton, England
Posts: 285




Rep Power: 0
Baron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-levelBaron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-levelBaron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-levelBaron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-levelBaron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-levelBaron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-levelBaron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-levelBaron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-levelBaron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-levelBaron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-levelBaron Mynd drags down this site on a Masaii-level
Default

neigh stay killing em
__________________
PROVEN BITER
Baron Mynd is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-27-2014, 08:37 AM   #14
ill nik-A
Super Senior Member
 
ill nik-A's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 7,420
Battle Record: 70-25

Accomplishments
- Hall of Fame

Champed
- Battle Arena
- BA Picture
- Picture Battle Tournament
- Netcees Battle League (3x)
- Netcees Writers League (2x)
- Summer Classic VI
- Fall Brawl III
- Netcees Battle League Season X
- Lyric Olympics

Rep Power: 77164519
ill nik-A has a brilliant futureill nik-A has a brilliant futureill nik-A has a brilliant futureill nik-A has a brilliant futureill nik-A has a brilliant futureill nik-A has a brilliant futureill nik-A has a brilliant futureill nik-A has a brilliant futureill nik-A has a brilliant futureill nik-A has a brilliant futureill nik-A has a brilliant future
Default

This was nice, paragraph format slayage, this was a lot more entertaining then most of the nerds that do it
__________________
Grumpy old man.
ill nik-A is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-27-2014, 09:57 AM   #15
dull boy
consults Lloyd
 
dull boy's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2013
Posts: 4,054
Battle Record: 0-8


Champed
-1-2 Punch League Roast

Rep Power: 39345604
dull boy has a brilliant futuredull boy has a brilliant futuredull boy has a brilliant futuredull boy has a brilliant futuredull boy has a brilliant futuredull boy has a brilliant futuredull boy has a brilliant futuredull boy has a brilliant futuredull boy has a brilliant futuredull boy has a brilliant futuredull boy has a brilliant future
Default

Rhinestone leather grip lol

This is like Zack mimicking Cristian mimicking Zack.
dull boy is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-27-2014, 10:20 AM   #16
Vulgar
Razor-thin derision
 
Vulgar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25

Accomplishments
- OM HOF

Champed
- Fight Night LIV
- Gimmick Battle League (2x)
- Write Week II
- Art of Writing League
- Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament
- STI
- Haiku Writer Challenge
- GWL Picture Challenge(2x)

Rep Power: 49604320
Vulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant future
Default

Dope work.
Vulgar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-27-2014, 03:03 PM   #17
Geno
White Earl
 
Geno's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Philly Cat.
Posts: 12,354
Battle Record: 10-15

Accomplishments
- Open Mic HOF (4x)

Champed
- Netcees Writers League
- Write Week I
- Write Week 8

Rep Power: 50036761
Geno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to Geno
Default

gritty.
__________________
-A.bove T.he R.est
Geno is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-27-2014, 07:37 PM   #18
Neighbor
Genghis Khan Vuitton
 
Neighbor's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,303
Battle Record: 30-10

Accomplishments
- Hall of Fame

Champed
- Pic Key Grand Prix
- 1-2 Season 1
- Newbie Tournament II
- Fight Night LXII
- Fight Night XLII
- Fight Night XXXIII
- Fight Night XXVI
- BA Swag & Flow
- 1-2 Punch League (2x)
- Netcees Battle League(2x)
- BA Slugfest II
- Fight Night of Champions
- Fight Night LXXXIII
- Summer Classic X

Rep Power: 34764471
Neighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant futureNeighbor has a brilliant future
Default

Damn, thanks for all the responses

Kinda threw this together, gotta shake the rust off somehow
__________________
Even signing my autograph’s like writing a slaughter pact
Neighbor is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-01-2014, 07:25 PM   #19
Geno
White Earl
 
Geno's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Philly Cat.
Posts: 12,354
Battle Record: 10-15

Accomplishments
- Open Mic HOF (4x)

Champed
- Netcees Writers League
- Write Week I
- Write Week 8

Rep Power: 50036761
Geno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant futureGeno has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to Geno
Default

^ i feel the same yo. what the fuck, i havnt even really considered writing at all in a while. i need to get back into this shit and start recording again. fuck. been letting myself go in a bad way. im on fight back mode now. fuk it
__________________
-A.bove T.he R.est
Geno is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 05-01-2014, 07:29 PM   #20
Frank
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2001
Posts: 3,228



Champed
- NWL Season 2
- Art of Writing League (5x)
- Lime Green Poetry Association
- AOWL Season 6
- AOWL Season 10

Rep Power: 3853347
Frank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant futureFrank has a brilliant future
Default

@Neighborhood

Interested in seeing as to what you think of my writing.

The K2 piece when you have a chance.
__________________
VETWORK
Frank is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Tags
this isnt discussion neigh


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:23 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
User Alert System provided by Advanced User Tagging (Lite) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2025 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.
Google+