The Passenger

PancakeBrah · 04-24-2014, 07:25 PM

Thought this was pretty good. The concept wasn't special to me. The wording seemed a bit obvious. But you started off right there. The verse is bare, just an open wound. Left its message and that's it. I liked it. Encapsulated in a capsule.

Pro-choice is the correct answer but I can accept a well written piece. This wasn't "well-written" by the normal standards here but you don't really drop so it was a refreshing different style. Cool read.

04-24-2014, 07:25 PM	#7
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Thought this was pretty good. The concept wasn't special to me. The wording seemed a bit obvious. But you started off right there. The verse is bare, just an open wound. Left its message and that's it. I liked it. Encapsulated in a capsule. Pro-choice is the correct answer but I can accept a well written piece. This wasn't "well-written" by the normal standards here but you don't really drop so it was a refreshing different style. Cool read. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder