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04-24-2014, 05:35 PM

veritas

HALL OF FAME

Join Date: Jan 2013

Location: portal 7 to the 9th exponent

Posts: 16,160

Battle Record: 3-5

Rep Power: 0

Smooth flow Jerome. Dope concept. excellent imagery and the ending is right.

Flow more.

Edit: if sen. Fluker reads this....maybe he wont be so on the fence about abortion eh?

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Originally Posted by Consensus

The cerebral assassin, the molder of minds, the Omni potent being. Time transcending traveler, wisdom incarnate. Veritas needs no intro but I guess I have to. He’s not know in the battling world but who doesn’t know veritas? The guy us always original and if you pay attention to his bars, dude brings the heat.. The gawd.

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