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04-23-2014, 10:13 PM
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Don't believe the hype
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 572
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Zen is technically sound, and one of those heads you look to read when he come out with a piece...knowing 'brevity is the soul of wit'. the first stanza was hypnotic, i felt the paragraph break/pause take me out of it...by content wise im not going to strengthen you in that, but you do have the right to write w/e
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