[Might use this in a battle] Critique?

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[Might use this in a battle] Critique?

04-20-2014, 10:57 PM

Ghost1

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Lol.

AYO tho

That don't kno if the top dropped like inception last scene could've been sooooo sick if you did it r8ght....concept is still fire tho

That lcd shit was forced as fuck tho lol....same with that awful 9/11 closer...jesus.

Ur wordplay is horribly forced. Stick with slick ideas and concepts.....less with the wordplays...unless ur gonna do em r8ght

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My dad once had like 4 beers at a family reunion, and drove us home better than my mom usually drives.
Not saying being drunk doesn’t mess up you reasoning. I’m turning 20 soon so I haven’t had a drink ever.

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