Week 8: 17. d0ubt (0-0) vs. 18. Johnathan Mercy (0-0) \\ Johnathan Mercy wins 5-1

timeless · 04-18-2014, 07:54 PM

Dagel, this was a cool little read. Flow on point as always. The backstory could’ve had more detail but wasn’t really needed, the imagery took over from the beginning. Not bad though, seen you come better than this.

Doubt, this was a good read as well. Ending was crisp. Your flow/wordplay was dope for the most part, couple of times were questionable but not bad.

This is a tight one. Gotta give this to Dagel for being more polished. I thought doubt had the more thought out piece but it wasn’t up to par with dagel technically.

04-18-2014, 07:54 PM	#7
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,623 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341329	Dagel, this was a cool little read. Flow on point as always. The backstory could’ve had more detail but wasn’t really needed, the imagery took over from the beginning. Not bad though, seen you come better than this. Doubt, this was a good read as well. Ending was crisp. Your flow/wordplay was dope for the most part, couple of times were questionable but not bad. This is a tight one. Gotta give this to Dagel for being more polished. I thought doubt had the more thought out piece but it wasn’t up to par with dagel technically.