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Old 04-18-2014, 09:57 AM   #6
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keep it simple

both similar in its intensity and high level of lyricism, both come across as expert in text battling/ topical writing.

Quote:
The mood is framed by the sewer fragrance
- and the spooky music of crooning geishas
shrewish notes across the ghoulish pavement
- gloomy, labored, subduing wailing
With cravings fueling the abuse of nature
- a confusion-laden askew creation
Unholy cesspool and the zoo of Satan
- Holy Shit

I think it comes down to who's piece was more entertaining and stood out

and that was Mercy's Very Close tough!
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