Week 7 contender match: Frank (5-1) vs. King Ra. (3-3) \\ King Ra. wins via disqualification

TheRealWayneBrady · 04-13-2014, 05:05 PM

This was really great.

Frank your style in this was a little bland and less descriptuve than usual and at times the repetitive scheme got boring to me. Id like to see a littlemmore imagery from you and also Ted and Jeffery don't stay at the same prison silly.

King ra lolz you overconfident bastard boy. I liked your approuch to the topic and thought you really did a good job at making this piece your own. Although the flow was crispt throughout I think I enjoyed the last little bit the most. Crisp and clean. Bravo

king ra +1

04-13-2014, 05:05 PM	#6
TheRealWayneBrady Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2014 Posts: 18 Battle Record: 1-0 Rep Power: 0	This was really great. Frank your style in this was a little bland and less descriptuve than usual and at times the repetitive scheme got boring to me. Id like to see a littlemmore imagery from you and also Ted and Jeffery don't stay at the same prison silly. King ra lolz you overconfident bastard boy. I liked your approuch to the topic and thought you really did a good job at making this piece your own. Although the flow was crispt throughout I think I enjoyed the last little bit the most. Crisp and clean. Bravo king ra +1 __________________