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Mitch · 04-13-2014, 06:36 AM

YOU HAVE STRANGE, INTERESTING, COMPLEX, BUT LAZY LYRICAL STYLE.
SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO UNDERSTAND YOUR SENTENCES.. LIKE WHEN YOU SAID " PHYSICALLY MOMENT" BECAUSE 'MOMENT' IS A NOUN, NOT A VERB, AND 'PHYSICALLY' IS AN ADJECTIVE. AN ADJECTIVE IS USED TO DESCRIBE A VERB, NOT A NOUN, SO "PHYSICALLY MOMENT" DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE. TRY TO WATCH THAT.
TRY PUTTING MORE TIME INTO IT, THE STYLE IS PRETTY SICK AND I LIKE HOW LOOSE IT FEELS, BUT IT NEED'S MORE SENSE.

04-13-2014, 06:36 AM	#3
Mitch Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Canada Posts: 160 Rep Power: 2208351	YOU HAVE STRANGE, INTERESTING, COMPLEX, BUT LAZY LYRICAL STYLE. SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO UNDERSTAND YOUR SENTENCES.. LIKE WHEN YOU SAID " PHYSICALLY MOMENT" BECAUSE 'MOMENT' IS A NOUN, NOT A VERB, AND 'PHYSICALLY' IS AN ADJECTIVE. AN ADJECTIVE IS USED TO DESCRIBE A VERB, NOT A NOUN, SO "PHYSICALLY MOMENT" DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE. TRY TO WATCH THAT. TRY PUTTING MORE TIME INTO IT, THE STYLE IS PRETTY SICK AND I LIKE HOW LOOSE IT FEELS, BUT IT NEED'S MORE SENSE. __________________ Soundcloud.com/TheDirtySerpent Last edited by Mitch; 04-13-2014 at 06:42 AM.