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Gone@i still want him dead
Topicals ain't no joke! I think I'd feel flattered....I Def get where ur coming from tho On that same thought U mind if I use some of ur deeper stuff on tinder? Birches would be so confused when we talk in person like......ermm u are mildly retarded how did u write them poems :/ Haha too late! Congrats on the rape. |
04-07-2014, 05:09 PM | #22 |
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you would have a tinder. lmao
idk how serious you are but go for it man. i don't care. but if your victim happens to google the lyrics you may run into some awkwardness. unlikely sure but that would be lol-worthy. even dickmouth markus could have used them if he had just asked beforehand in mid 2012.
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04-07-2014, 05:24 PM | #23 |
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May srsly topical the pussy
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04-09-2014, 01:36 PM | #25 |
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you are right about that. good looking out man. i appreciate your thoughts on it.
last jump. i have a lot of comments to give.
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stop trying to make the things you say sound meaningful filling weak bars with a bunch of meaningless crap meant to sound profound or relevant with your attempts at speaking poeticly, you have weak rhymes and no flow, that whole verse was a desperate attempt to set a tone to sound good when you know in reality subconsciously that you have no lyrical substance within your entire cranium
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04-10-2014, 01:06 PM | #27 |
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word, lmfao at cherry wood frank with an axe,
How do u operate at this high mental platform and harmonize with the force, alcohol sometimes?
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we can't talk here nyc. its not safe...
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samurai soul. self sacrifice who sat in a grove
watched the valleys grow to cityscapes and vanish below it could be simple. like a ripple in a glass of merlot a flash of the bulb, grainy photograph, thumbtacked to a post ^^Nice. i've been victimized by imitation more than a bit his lordship. mighty morpheme power laser equipped horseback ranger with an arrow pointed straight at your neck leave me exempt. forget your hall of fame and respect probably rated best. i haven't bothered to check molten lava. magma melodies that melted the wax whether crystalized or fluid our intelligence stats candles and chrysanthemum, that sensory snap crackling like cherrywood. that's Frank with an axe ^^Dope. This is good Black...imagery is always a feature in your pieces and this had it in spades.Thought how you opened was slick, the middle was solid and what I quoted last was the best part of the verse.I have to be in the mood to read your work a lot of the time man, it's kinda depressin' and I'm an angry person lol...thoroughly enjoyable stuff though. Stay upwards. |
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