deadman - GRAVETRIPPER

Rahiim · 04-10-2014, 12:43 PM

stop trying to make the things you say sound meaningful filling weak bars with a bunch of meaningless crap meant to sound profound or relevant with your attempts at speaking poeticly, you have weak rhymes and no flow, that whole verse was a desperate attempt to set a tone to sound good when you know in reality subconsciously that you have no lyrical substance within your entire cranium

04-10-2014, 12:43 PM	#26
Rahiim Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2014 Posts: 2 Rep Power: 0	stop trying to make the things you say sound meaningful filling weak bars with a bunch of meaningless crap meant to sound profound or relevant with your attempts at speaking poeticly, you have weak rhymes and no flow, that whole verse was a desperate attempt to set a tone to sound good when you know in reality subconsciously that you have no lyrical substance within your entire cranium