burnt honey

e11even · 04-10-2014, 04:19 AM

This had a very calming feel to it. I loved your choices in wording and language, as the abstract subtlety built very poetic and interesting imagery. Fully rhyming this piece would have been the icing on the cake, but i think i see what you were doing here. This is technically my first time reading you, seeing as how for some reason I never finished reading the other stuff you dropped in the league, but I think your style is very interesting, and over time can be a serious spectacle in OM. Keep it up :)

04-10-2014, 04:19 AM	#1
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	This had a very calming feel to it. I loved your choices in wording and language, as the abstract subtlety built very poetic and interesting imagery. Fully rhyming this piece would have been the icing on the cake, but i think i see what you were doing here. This is technically my first time reading you, seeing as how for some reason I never finished reading the other stuff you dropped in the league, but I think your style is very interesting, and over time can be a serious spectacle in OM. Keep it up :) __________________ Ahem.