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Old 04-10-2014, 12:22 AM   #1
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I like it but it seems lazy and is if this isn't your typical style, though this is the first piece I have read of yours. A lot of words seem like they were simply multiple-rhyme filler. It was hard to follow the flow first read. I'll check out more shit, it was interesting enough to read full through but it doesn't seem like this was your full potential, or even half, so ill leave the feed at that.
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