Justice?

e11even · 04-08-2014, 07:53 PM

Wow. Its very cool to see the shit you're capable of- seeing as how you never... well, you know. I loved the consistency in your thought and execution. The flow was everso crisp and interesting and your story+rhyming kept me reeled in til the final reveal. Throughout the story I was under the impression the character was in hell... a sort of Dante's Inferno type setting, with tiers and shit. But I loved it for what it was, even though the character turned out to be gay? Great job, Wit.

04-08-2014, 07:53 PM	#5
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Wow. Its very cool to see the shit you're capable of- seeing as how you never... well, you know. I loved the consistency in your thought and execution. The flow was everso crisp and interesting and your story+rhyming kept me reeled in til the final reveal. Throughout the story I was under the impression the character was in hell... a sort of Dante's Inferno type setting, with tiers and shit. But I loved it for what it was, even though the character turned out to be gay? Great job, Wit. __________________ Ahem.