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04-08-2014, 07:28 PM
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This was cool. I think if this went a little darker it would have been a more satisfying read imo. I think the worst part of this verse came down to the testes/testes part. I really think that could have been done better, but overall I liked this very much. Keep dropping and I'll feed when I see you.
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