Round 1: Utmost vs ill nik-A {ill nik-A wins}

God Of War · 01-23-2013, 11:49 AM

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Minimum of 10 Lines, No More than 16

Round 1 Battles are Due on Sunday at Midnight Pacific

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ill nik-A · 01-24-2013, 10:07 AM

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Utmost · 01-24-2013, 03:28 PM

checkin in

ill nik-A · 01-27-2013, 10:31 PM

10 sent to gow

Utmost · 01-28-2013, 05:02 AM

sent 10

God Of War · 01-28-2013, 02:07 PM

utmost verse

Ura Decrepid fuck, powder abuser vetted smuck; so keep clutchin ya fables
my white lie is sayin Niks good, Ur White Lie is cut on the table.. ready to stuff in ya nasal
I'll leave u limbless n sloppy, Take YOU as a Souvenir from my binge wit the shotty
& since I Hail from Parts Unknown, it also explains why the police are missin ya body
Neigh SHIT on you the instant ya provided a pic; now Im pipin ya chick til her hymen just splits
So dont make this a pissing contest...Cos whether its AOB or ya girl; they just say "UT, I. is a bitch"
young muscle turned father time into completely flab, since that coke habit was deletin fat
I'd say Age hasnt been kind to you Nik, but its more like Age hauled off and beat THAT ASS!!!
Nigga ya done
If u a soldier, thats quite the claim; set an ambush n suprise you wit blades
slice up ya frame..then send u to ur group home just to make sure this L derives in pain

.done

ILL NIK A VERSE

Niggaz scared to battle me cuz I’m truly a star
If u want the Utmost respect, u gettin murdered by throwaway bars like the noobie u are
Don’t give a fuck if u an alias u still getting clowned cuzz
So if u try & weasel ur way to bein worth something… its just material to make mink coats out of
This is a sound off & I got punches bashin all dreams
So if u ready to Duke it out… my fists are the entire Hurricanes basketball team
But there wont be an upset here cuz I’m rapin u yo
& If u’re looking for one… then its one hell of an April fool’s joke
U got wack lines after wack lines while I give clowns hell boy
It’s such a vicious cycle… it’d win championships for Lance Armstrong without steroids

Geno · 01-28-2013, 05:39 PM

Well. Utmost has potential.. but I feel like he was forcing his shit too much, or maybe trying to hard or something. Didn't really land not one punch worth quoting for me. The closest he came was uti shit. And that was a hell of a stretched play.

Nika came basic as hell. Just like he claimed in his verse. But I feel like his opener and closer was enough to win for him, had a couple cool stabs inbetween but went soft imo.. anyway, still a win

V-nika

Sharp · 01-28-2013, 06:39 PM

Elder writhes

v

Vicious cycle

Utmost was more aggressive statements, while Nika's punches were overall stronger. That L derives/elder writhes was a actually really good, but it the rest of the verse couldn't support it. Much closer than I was expecting, but nika clearly didnt spend any time on it. Having said that, he did more than enough to win. Keep up though, Uptmost, you definitely are on the right track

V/ Nika

Allen Knight · 01-29-2013, 04:09 PM

I'll leave u limbless n sloppy, Take YOU as a Souvenir from my binge wit the shotty
& since I Hail from Parts Unknown, it also explains why the police are missin ya body

Vs

Niggaz scared to battle me cuz I’m truly a star
If u want the Utmost respect, u gettin murdered by throwaway bars like the noobie u are
Don’t give a fuck if u an alias u still getting clowned cuzz
So if u try & weasel ur way to bein worth something… its just material to make mink coats out of
This is a sound off & I got punches bashin all dreams
So if u ready to Duke it out… my fists are the entire Hurricanes basketball team

V/nik, he was alot more consistent wit fresher concepts, utmost came wit to many played bars on nik
he has potential but wording needs a little work an def concepts but that bar i quoted was cool,
i got nik here, props yah'll. cool read

SiK · 01-29-2013, 08:36 PM

I'll leave u limbless n sloppy, Take YOU as a Souvenir from my binge wit the shotty
& since I Hail from Parts Unknown, it also explains why the police are missin ya body
young muscle turned father time into completely flab, since that coke habit was deletin fat
I'd say Age hasnt been kind to you Nik, but its more like Age hauled off and beat THAT ASS!!

Vs

Niggaz scared to battle me cuz I’m truly a star
If u want the Utmost respect, u gettin murdered by throwaway bars like the noobie u are
Don’t give a fuck if u an alias u still getting clowned cuzz
So if u try & weasel ur way to bein worth something… its just material to make mink coats
U got wack lines after wack lines while I give clowns hell boy
It’s such a vicious cycle… it’d win championships for Lance Armstrong without steroids

Utmost came pretty decent here.....wording was off in spots but definetly got the potential to be a beast in text. Nika didnt bring his best as im sure we all can tell....IMO almost took this battle a little too lightly but I was REALLY feelin the mink coat and armstrong lines...No real haymakers here but ima have to go wit Nik on 1 more quote and consistency.

V/Nik

Hush · 01-30-2013, 12:41 PM

Ura Decrepid fuck, powder abuser vetted smuck; so keep clutchin ya fables
my white lie is sayin Niks good, Ur White Lie is cut on the table.. ready to stuff in ya nasal
Neigh SHIT on you the instant ya provided a pic; now Im pipin ya chick til her hymen just splits
So dont make this a pissing contest...Cos whether its AOB or ya girl; they just say "UT, I. is a bitch"

Ut did pretty good, I was pleasantly suprised.

Niggaz scared to battle me cuz I’m truly a star
If u want the Utmost respect, u gettin murdered by throwaway bars like the noobie u are
Don’t give a fuck if u an alias u still getting clowned cuzz
So if u try & weasel ur way to bein worth something… its just material to make mink coats out of
This is a sound off & I got punches bashin all dreams
So if u ready to Duke it out… my fists are the entire Hurricanes basketball team

NIk had harder hits and better unquotables

good battle tho

Ut got potential

v/nik

Sn00p · 01-30-2013, 03:35 PM

Ura Decrepid fuck, powder abuser vetted smuck; so keep clutchin ya fables
my white lie is sayin Niks good, Ur White Lie is cut on the table.. ready to stuff in ya nasal
^aite. feels slightly old unfortunately
I'll leave u limbless n sloppy, Take YOU as a Souvenir from my binge wit the shotty
& since I Hail from Parts Unknown, it also explains why the police are missin ya body
^like the wording. concept's not bad
Neigh SHIT on you the instant ya provided a pic; now Im pipin ya chick til her hymen just splits
So dont make this a pissing contest...Cos whether its AOB or ya girl; they just say "UT, I. is a bitch"
^not bad
young muscle turned father time into completely flab, since that coke habit was deletin fat
I'd say Age hasnt been kind to you Nik, but its more like Age hauled off and beat THAT ASS!!!
^lol. wording was nice. concept is a little simple
If u a soldier, thats quite the claim; set an ambush n suprise you wit blades
slice up ya frame..then send u to ur group home just to make sure this L derives in pain
^cool

vs.

Niggaz scared to battle me cuz I’m truly a star
If u want the Utmost respect, u gettin murdered by throwaway bars like the noobie u are
^solid opener
Don’t give a fuck if u an alias u still getting clowned cuzz
So if u try & weasel ur way to bein worth something… its just material to make mink coats out of
^decent
This is a sound off & I got punches bashin all dreams
So if u ready to Duke it out… my fists are the entire Hurricanes basketball team
^cool
But there wont be an upset here cuz I’m rapin u yo
& If u’re looking for one… then its one hell of an April fool’s joke
^hmm. decent
U got wack lines after wack lines while I give clowns hell boy
It’s such a vicious cycle… it’d win championships for Lance Armstrong without steroids
^aite

this is way closer that the votes show imo. utmost reminds me of c.gaffle. he has quite nice concepts, but sometimes they're somewhat hidden in the lines. i like that style tho, and i like his wording too. for me it was ut's last 2 versus nik's 1st three. all the bars in this battle were decent too, but those were the best. and becuz it's 3-2 in nik's favor, i gotta give it to him. i could actually see this going either way tho, so mad props to ut. he has mad potential. props to both.
v/nik

Cashius · 01-30-2013, 06:23 PM

Ut was decent. Parts unknown and age kind were ok. Nothing else stood out.

Nik had weasel, duke, and cycle.

They were enough to take it.

Nik.

Orc · 01-30-2013, 06:36 PM

experience won out here. utmost done good he just needs to work more on making his punches hit. cool concepts and refreshing style. nik was ok. done enuff to win. barely

~RustyGunZ~ · 01-30-2013, 08:59 PM

parts unknown

vs

duke, lance armstrong

I feel like Utmost had some cool plays, but it just seems he tried really hard amd forced some ideas that just difnt come off smoothly.. like the concept was decent enough but the wording and execution was just off to me.. I liked the cycle/steroid/armstrong play the best, Nik was more polished and better executed

V/Lika

01-23-2013, 11:49 AM	#1
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,822 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493983	Round 1: Utmost vs ill nik-A {ill nik-A wins} House Rules Apply Minimum of 10 Lines, No More than 16 Round 1 Battles are Due on Sunday at Midnight Pacific Explained Votes Only! Good' Luck

01-24-2013, 10:07 AM	#2
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	10 Welcome! http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...OPEN-FOR-VOTES http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...PEN-FOR-VOTES) http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...PEN-FOR-VOTES) http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...PEN-FOR-VOTES) __________________ Grumpy old man.

01-27-2013, 10:31 PM	#4
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	10 sent to gow __________________ Grumpy old man.

01-28-2013, 05:39 PM	#7
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Well. Utmost has potential.. but I feel like he was forcing his shit too much, or maybe trying to hard or something. Didn't really land not one punch worth quoting for me. The closest he came was uti shit. And that was a hell of a stretched play. Nika came basic as hell. Just like he claimed in his verse. But I feel like his opener and closer was enough to win for him, had a couple cool stabs inbetween but went soft imo.. anyway, still a win V-nika __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

01-29-2013, 04:09 PM	#9
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	I'll leave u limbless n sloppy, Take YOU as a Souvenir from my binge wit the shotty & since I Hail from Parts Unknown, it also explains why the police are missin ya body Vs Niggaz scared to battle me cuz I’m truly a star If u want the Utmost respect, u gettin murdered by throwaway bars like the noobie u are Don’t give a fuck if u an alias u still getting clowned cuzz So if u try & weasel ur way to bein worth something… its just material to make mink coats out of This is a sound off & I got punches bashin all dreams So if u ready to Duke it out… my fists are the entire Hurricanes basketball team V/nik, he was alot more consistent wit fresher concepts, utmost came wit to many played bars on nik he has potential but wording needs a little work an def concepts but that bar i quoted was cool, i got nik here, props yah'll. cool read __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

01-24-2013, 03:28 PM	#3
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	checkin in

01-28-2013, 05:02 AM	#5
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01-28-2013, 02:07 PM	#6
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,822 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493983	utmost verse Ura Decrepid fuck, powder abuser vetted smuck; so keep clutchin ya fables my white lie is sayin Niks good, Ur White Lie is cut on the table.. ready to stuff in ya nasal I'll leave u limbless n sloppy, Take YOU as a Souvenir from my binge wit the shotty & since I Hail from Parts Unknown, it also explains why the police are missin ya body Neigh SHIT on you the instant ya provided a pic; now Im pipin ya chick til her hymen just splits So dont make this a pissing contest...Cos whether its AOB or ya girl; they just say "UT, I. is a bitch" young muscle turned father time into completely flab, since that coke habit was deletin fat I'd say Age hasnt been kind to you Nik, but its more like Age hauled off and beat THAT ASS!!! Nigga ya done If u a soldier, thats quite the claim; set an ambush n suprise you wit blades slice up ya frame..then send u to ur group home just to make sure this L derives in pain .done ILL NIK A VERSE Niggaz scared to battle me cuz I’m truly a star If u want the Utmost respect, u gettin murdered by throwaway bars like the noobie u are Don’t give a fuck if u an alias u still getting clowned cuzz So if u try & weasel ur way to bein worth something… its just material to make mink coats out of This is a sound off & I got punches bashin all dreams So if u ready to Duke it out… my fists are the entire Hurricanes basketball team But there wont be an upset here cuz I’m rapin u yo & If u’re looking for one… then its one hell of an April fool’s joke U got wack lines after wack lines while I give clowns hell boy It’s such a vicious cycle… it’d win championships for Lance Armstrong without steroids

01-28-2013, 06:39 PM	#8
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601538	Elder writhes v Vicious cycle Utmost was more aggressive statements, while Nika's punches were overall stronger. That L derives/elder writhes was a actually really good, but it the rest of the verse couldn't support it. Much closer than I was expecting, but nika clearly didnt spend any time on it. Having said that, he did more than enough to win. Keep up though, Uptmost, you definitely are on the right track V/ Nika

01-29-2013, 08:36 PM	#10
SiK Sergeant Slaughter Join Date: Mar 1986 Posts: 1,913 Battle Record: 13-4 Rep Power: 3648788	I'll leave u limbless n sloppy, Take YOU as a Souvenir from my binge wit the shotty & since I Hail from Parts Unknown, it also explains why the police are missin ya body young muscle turned father time into completely flab, since that coke habit was deletin fat I'd say Age hasnt been kind to you Nik, but its more like Age hauled off and beat THAT ASS!! Vs Niggaz scared to battle me cuz I’m truly a star If u want the Utmost respect, u gettin murdered by throwaway bars like the noobie u are Don’t give a fuck if u an alias u still getting clowned cuzz So if u try & weasel ur way to bein worth something… its just material to make mink coats U got wack lines after wack lines while I give clowns hell boy It’s such a vicious cycle… it’d win championships for Lance Armstrong without steroids Utmost came pretty decent here.....wording was off in spots but definetly got the potential to be a beast in text. Nika didnt bring his best as im sure we all can tell....IMO almost took this battle a little too lightly but I was REALLY feelin the mink coat and armstrong lines...No real haymakers here but ima have to go wit Nik on 1 more quote and consistency. V/Nik

01-30-2013, 12:41 PM	#11
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Ura Decrepid fuck, powder abuser vetted smuck; so keep clutchin ya fables my white lie is sayin Niks good, Ur White Lie is cut on the table.. ready to stuff in ya nasal Neigh SHIT on you the instant ya provided a pic; now Im pipin ya chick til her hymen just splits So dont make this a pissing contest...Cos whether its AOB or ya girl; they just say "UT, I. is a bitch" Ut did pretty good, I was pleasantly suprised. Niggaz scared to battle me cuz I’m truly a star If u want the Utmost respect, u gettin murdered by throwaway bars like the noobie u are Don’t give a fuck if u an alias u still getting clowned cuzz So if u try & weasel ur way to bein worth something… its just material to make mink coats out of This is a sound off & I got punches bashin all dreams So if u ready to Duke it out… my fists are the entire Hurricanes basketball team NIk had harder hits and better unquotables good battle tho Ut got potential v/nik

01-30-2013, 03:35 PM	#12
Sn00p General German Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,988 Battle Record: 26-12 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Line4Line Cypher Tourney - Back2Basics - Fight Night XLVI Rep Power: 15213753	Ura Decrepid fuck, powder abuser vetted smuck; so keep clutchin ya fables my white lie is sayin Niks good, Ur White Lie is cut on the table.. ready to stuff in ya nasal ^aite. feels slightly old unfortunately I'll leave u limbless n sloppy, Take YOU as a Souvenir from my binge wit the shotty & since I Hail from Parts Unknown, it also explains why the police are missin ya body ^like the wording. concept's not bad Neigh SHIT on you the instant ya provided a pic; now Im pipin ya chick til her hymen just splits So dont make this a pissing contest...Cos whether its AOB or ya girl; they just say "UT, I. is a bitch" ^not bad young muscle turned father time into completely flab, since that coke habit was deletin fat I'd say Age hasnt been kind to you Nik, but its more like Age hauled off and beat THAT ASS!!! ^lol. wording was nice. concept is a little simple If u a soldier, thats quite the claim; set an ambush n suprise you wit blades slice up ya frame..then send u to ur group home just to make sure this L derives in pain ^cool vs. Niggaz scared to battle me cuz I’m truly a star If u want the Utmost respect, u gettin murdered by throwaway bars like the noobie u are ^solid opener Don’t give a fuck if u an alias u still getting clowned cuzz So if u try & weasel ur way to bein worth something… its just material to make mink coats out of ^decent This is a sound off & I got punches bashin all dreams So if u ready to Duke it out… my fists are the entire Hurricanes basketball team ^cool But there wont be an upset here cuz I’m rapin u yo & If u’re looking for one… then its one hell of an April fool’s joke ^hmm. decent U got wack lines after wack lines while I give clowns hell boy It’s such a vicious cycle… it’d win championships for Lance Armstrong without steroids ^aite this is way closer that the votes show imo. utmost reminds me of c.gaffle. he has quite nice concepts, but sometimes they're somewhat hidden in the lines. i like that style tho, and i like his wording too. for me it was ut's last 2 versus nik's 1st three. all the bars in this battle were decent too, but those were the best. and becuz it's 3-2 in nik's favor, i gotta give it to him. i could actually see this going either way tho, so mad props to ut. he has mad potential. props to both. v/nik

01-30-2013, 06:23 PM	#13
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	Ut was decent. Parts unknown and age kind were ok. Nothing else stood out. Nik had weasel, duke, and cycle. They were enough to take it. Nik.

01-30-2013, 06:36 PM	#14
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	experience won out here. utmost done good he just needs to work more on making his punches hit. cool concepts and refreshing style. nik was ok. done enuff to win. barely