Bare.

[david stern razor burns]

Hi Genocide. This was an excellent piece. You clearly have a real grasp of flow and structure, that much is obvious. You also have a knack for writing interesting and original content while not sacrificing the other technical aspects of your verses like scheming and multi's etc. Besides the "props" I also want to offer you one small criticism.

frozen and stiff, eyes wide open like your focussed as shit

This line felt out of place, and the only reason being was the needless use of a crummy word. Using the word "shit" was a cop-out. Yes we are all guilty of using curse words in our pieces, but this one in particular stuck out like a sore thumb to me when I read it. It just seemed lazy, and like I say, didn't really fit in with the feel of this piece. Besides that small error this was a very strong effort. Please keep these verses flowing in here.