AOWL Week 5: Witty (1-2) VS. nO goOd! (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES!!!

Inno · 03-18-2013, 11:16 PM

no good

man your story telling was onpoint here...great character developement brah..i felt like i could relate with
the main character...this was dope shit tbh. i mean it flowed great and it didnt have that complex feel to it but
it dame sure had that depth...it had alot more than the surface led to believe. great take on the topic..you made it
your own and i felt like this was a peek into your life....dope.

witty.

man you never disapoint my nigga. your skills are something to watch. this was on some fly shit man...great story telling as well
no mechanically errors from what i see..also the multis are just outstanding and just made your flow and scheme that much doper.
great take on the topic..felt like this had some poetic overtones to it..not to much but just enough for me to notice them...dope shit witty

overall..

im going to be honest with...i thought this could go either way. i mean witty dropped dopenss like usually. cant take nothing away from him
while no good dropped equally dope and seemed to match witty line for line. so for me it came down to who had the better more compelling
storyline..i felt like no good had that..simply because it felt a little more personal than witty's

another dope battle...

no good

03-18-2013, 11:16 PM	#13
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	no good man your story telling was onpoint here...great character developement brah..i felt like i could relate with the main character...this was dope shit tbh. i mean it flowed great and it didnt have that complex feel to it but it dame sure had that depth...it had alot more than the surface led to believe. great take on the topic..you made it your own and i felt like this was a peek into your life....dope. witty. man you never disapoint my nigga. your skills are something to watch. this was on some fly shit man...great story telling as well no mechanically errors from what i see..also the multis are just outstanding and just made your flow and scheme that much doper. great take on the topic..felt like this had some poetic overtones to it..not to much but just enough for me to notice them...dope shit witty overall.. im going to be honest with...i thought this could go either way. i mean witty dropped dopenss like usually. cant take nothing away from him while no good dropped equally dope and seemed to match witty line for line. so for me it came down to who had the better more compelling storyline..i felt like no good had that..simply because it felt a little more personal than witty's another dope battle... no good