AOWL Week 5: Innovator (2-2) VS. King Keith (1-1) OPEN FOR VOTES!!!

Witty · 03-18-2013, 08:23 PM

Innovator - Really enjoyed this man, very poetic as usual and a lot of really interesting lines. You used the topic really well, and the piece never strayed from it for a second. There were parts that did seem a little too basic for my liking, but honestly they were outshined by the good parts, the middle bit was definitely my favourite...the language used and the vivid imagery was beautiful, that shit was really well written. All in all, a very solid piece that shows what you bring to the table, props man...keep doing your thing, you're original and that can only be a good thing.

Keith - man some of the vocab in this was crazy lol and the imagery was up there with the best I have read this week, I really feel like you're far too under rated, I can see you challenging anyone in this league. I would like to see you experiment more with your schemes and really get a dope flow going, I think that would add a lot to your style. This was really enjoyable...an interesting and fresh read, it did have the same sort of feel as your opponents, but I felt the way you described everything was what made this stand out, very good writing man, props.

I liked this battle a lot, both did their thing and dropped some fresh pieces....I just felt one was a bit more intriguing.

Vote - King Keith

03-18-2013, 08:23 PM	#13
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Innovator - Really enjoyed this man, very poetic as usual and a lot of really interesting lines. You used the topic really well, and the piece never strayed from it for a second. There were parts that did seem a little too basic for my liking, but honestly they were outshined by the good parts, the middle bit was definitely my favourite...the language used and the vivid imagery was beautiful, that shit was really well written. All in all, a very solid piece that shows what you bring to the table, props man...keep doing your thing, you're original and that can only be a good thing. Keith - man some of the vocab in this was crazy lol and the imagery was up there with the best I have read this week, I really feel like you're far too under rated, I can see you challenging anyone in this league. I would like to see you experiment more with your schemes and really get a dope flow going, I think that would add a lot to your style. This was really enjoyable...an interesting and fresh read, it did have the same sort of feel as your opponents, but I felt the way you described everything was what made this stand out, very good writing man, props. I liked this battle a lot, both did their thing and dropped some fresh pieces....I just felt one was a bit more intriguing. Vote - King Keith __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.