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Old 03-27-2014, 09:00 PM   #1
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Every day of the week when I awake from a sleep, I'm a different person
It's like, each day is a scene and far away in my dreams I'm just rehearsing
^Dope. Really loved the wording on this in particular.

This started off a little slow but after the art line it began to pick up nicely and was very entertaining. The emotion is the star in this, and that with your use of multis paced this along effortlessly. Drop more in the OM.
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