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03-18-2013, 12:22 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2013
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innovator.
pros; good vigor cons; poor rhyme scheme did you rush it? be honest man.............. I seen you come a whole lot sicker man.... this kind of tripped over it self,,I wasn't enthralled forreal... you said she immolate but you meant she emulate? No hate man.... I could tell you rushed it tbh I thought it wasn't up to par.... king keith. pros; interesting story line cons; mediocre closer I got the pharaoh flow...... this shit was like reading a scroll man lmao... some of your wordplay was tame when you were describing the lions...or the bees... you said that the sting was powerful enough to put a human to sleep????? my suggestion to you is magnify your wordplay a more v/king keith |
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