AOWL Week 5: Innovator (2-2) VS. King Keith (1-1) OPEN FOR VOTES!!!

Mike Wrecka · 03-17-2013, 11:19 PM

good battle.

innovator- stepped up this week. got back on track. pretty dope verse. had a good flow and was structured nicely. really enjoyed the first half, but it tapered off a tad towards the end.

king keith- I liked your take on the topic. the different animals was unexpected but it worked. good mechanics and flow. and ya the part about the humans really shined.

Our traits surpass any species, we adapt to survive.
Quick to sacrifice our very own, subtract & divide.

good stuff

vote- kk

overall - I liked both verses. just enjoyed king keith's slightly more. had better imagery and his part about humans was better than innovators by a bit. the rest was icing on the cake. good work guys enjoyed the reads

03-17-2013, 11:19 PM	#8
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	good battle. innovator- stepped up this week. got back on track. pretty dope verse. had a good flow and was structured nicely. really enjoyed the first half, but it tapered off a tad towards the end. king keith- I liked your take on the topic. the different animals was unexpected but it worked. good mechanics and flow. and ya the part about the humans really shined. Our traits surpass any species, we adapt to survive. Quick to sacrifice our very own, subtract & divide. good stuff vote- kk overall - I liked both verses. just enjoyed king keith's slightly more. had better imagery and his part about humans was better than innovators by a bit. the rest was icing on the cake. good work guys enjoyed the reads