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03-24-2014, 10:04 PM
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Senior Member
Join Date: Dec 2013
Location: Upstate NY
Posts: 264
Battle Record: 11-5
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Interesting, a little creepy and wierd for the most part. I feel like the flow was pretty good, the rhyme schemes where dope but the story was fucked up. I feel like the nice wording took away from the story a little bit, but in all reality it is difficult to find that happy medium. Not a bad piece besides the whole cannibalistic element.
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