yeah i wasn't feeling this either dude haha
the killing woman shit is just played to death, pun intended. eating them and selling the meat etc was just weird.i think the whole thing just came off strange. if u were trying to be funny idunno it just didn't really work man. structurally it was good, flow was solid, nothing too crazy here on a technical level. obviously had an audio style type of rhythm which is good, could easily convert this. but yeah just wasn't a real original idea or anything, i usually like ur stuff so this was a step back for me, as always thanks for the feed on mine
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