Week 4: Vividlyvague (3-0) vs. Pinot Grij (2-0) \\ Vividlyvague wins 6-1

King Ra. · 03-24-2014, 01:43 AM

Vivid, you've been killing these dialogues with ease of late and it seems to be a part of your arsenal. But while the dialogue was impressive, what really drove your piece is the amount of detail and content you're able to put within the dialogue itself. It really gives your character(s) a voice and brings them to life. Even more than that, you managed to tell a great story, and the humor within was refreshing as well. Pinot, I know you definitely could have made this a great contest, and it sucks that you had that computer incident occur. With what you managed to put here, I loved the creativity you had. Beyond the solid mechanics and creativity, your piece lacked the depth and content to take down your opponent.

MVGT: Vividlyvague.

03-24-2014, 01:43 AM	#10
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Vivid, you've been killing these dialogues with ease of late and it seems to be a part of your arsenal. But while the dialogue was impressive, what really drove your piece is the amount of detail and content you're able to put within the dialogue itself. It really gives your character(s) a voice and brings them to life. Even more than that, you managed to tell a great story, and the humor within was refreshing as well. Pinot, I know you definitely could have made this a great contest, and it sucks that you had that computer incident occur. With what you managed to put here, I loved the creativity you had. Beyond the solid mechanics and creativity, your piece lacked the depth and content to take down your opponent. MVGT: Vividlyvague. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.