Week 4: timeless (2-1) vs. ZYG (2-1) \\ ZYG wins 6-0

King Ra. · 03-24-2014, 01:27 AM

Zygote, you have this uncanning ability to put together these incredible, metaphoric, well written pieces week in, week out. It's very rare that you slip up, and usually sometimes you can be so complex and deep that it goes over a lot of peoples heads. Here you mesh in great storytelling with such in-depth attention to detail. I read your piece multiple times and it just impresses with how tightly written it is. I feel this is one of the more creative pieces you've put together. Well done. Timeless, this is my first time getting the chance to vote on your match this season, but I've read your work and you continue to develop your skills gradually. This is your best piece thus far, and I liked the direction you went. Dialogue has to be the most difficult things to put together and for the most part you did well, though you had your share of hiccups. Compared to your opponents piece, this wasn't as creative direction wise, but I liked what you did though. You really excelled in the tone you set from beginning to end. Going up against an opponent like Zyg means really putting it all together, and I'd say you had some of that going for you but not quite enough.

Timeless did a solid job this week, with a much better written piece, but Zyg was just a bit too overwhelming here putting together one of my favorite reads this week. Could be considered VOTW imo.

MVGT: Zygote.

03-24-2014, 01:27 AM	#9
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Zygote, you have this uncanning ability to put together these incredible, metaphoric, well written pieces week in, week out. It's very rare that you slip up, and usually sometimes you can be so complex and deep that it goes over a lot of peoples heads. Here you mesh in great storytelling with such in-depth attention to detail. I read your piece multiple times and it just impresses with how tightly written it is. I feel this is one of the more creative pieces you've put together. Well done. Timeless, this is my first time getting the chance to vote on your match this season, but I've read your work and you continue to develop your skills gradually. This is your best piece thus far, and I liked the direction you went. Dialogue has to be the most difficult things to put together and for the most part you did well, though you had your share of hiccups. Compared to your opponents piece, this wasn't as creative direction wise, but I liked what you did though. You really excelled in the tone you set from beginning to end. Going up against an opponent like Zyg means really putting it all together, and I'd say you had some of that going for you but not quite enough. Timeless did a solid job this week, with a much better written piece, but Zyg was just a bit too overwhelming here putting together one of my favorite reads this week. Could be considered VOTW imo. MVGT: Zygote. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.