Mother Earth Rises

Natural · 03-22-2014, 03:48 AM

Mother Earth:
I've been neglected, disrespected, used as a lucrative vessel
Polluted, congested, stripped of nutrients on a lunatics level
I've been tested by science, questioned, subjected to violence
I was hijacked by peasants who produce weapons on islands
My beautiful features destroyed by their homosapien leisure
Once a utopian kingdom, stead focus on freedoms seizure
Now a dystopian waste land, barren, it's decline is apparent
The modern day crime, a sign that we have lost our bearing
Staring down the path of terrible places, narrow with hatred
Cupid committed suicide with his own arrow just to escape it
These shoulders can no longer take it, i fold under the weight
I'm too old to be treated this way, the toll leaves me in dismay
Forty Nights of flooding, you'll feel my cries until I dry to nothing
An atmosphere full of blasphemy, You'll feel the wrath coming
Natural catastrophes, clashing sea's, tsunami causing tragedies
It's time the mother rises, secure the new horizon, birth new family

Ghost1 · 03-22-2014, 10:16 AM

And father faggot goes down

The end.

Congrats on the rape.

zygote · 03-22-2014, 10:43 AM

Salutations, enjoyed the forceful entry of the language into the fray. As soon as it began it was clear that you know how to take advantage of a situation. It was an assault, the short rhyme schemes had a kind of statutory quality. The picture in of itself gives the feeling of rapelling or abseiling. The gun and the face form a sort of trapezium shape, and I think you identified and pinned down this construct. You really know how to play with and molest words to change the meaning of certain colloquialisms. The way you violated common writing conventions to make a serious point about the exploitation of the environment was excellent. Congratulations on the upload.

Ghost1 · 03-22-2014, 11:52 AM

Deaaaaadddd

Fig · 03-22-2014, 04:09 PM

Damn feed of the year

Natural · 03-22-2014, 06:55 PM

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Originally Posted by ZYG

Salutations, enjoyed the forceful entry of the language into the fray. As soon as it began it was clear that you know how to take advantage of a situation. It was an assault, the short rhyme schemes had a kind of statutory quality. The picture in of itself gives the feeling of rapelling or abseiling. The gun and the face form a sort of trapezium shape, and I think you identified and pinned down this construct. You really know how to play with and molest words to change the meaning of certain colloquialisms. The way you violated common writing conventions to make a serious point about the exploitation of the environment was excellent. Congratulations on the upload.

I've gotta say you're an ass hole...but
You put a fresh spin on an old and tired falsified joke.
You are better than the originator. I actually got a laugh from this.
Ain't gonna lie.

Natural · 03-22-2014, 07:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fig

Damn joke of the year

Agreed, actually. Granted he has had the foundation put into place before him
but non the less...probably the best I've read on netcees
in a long long while.

Lol @ 71 views.

03-22-2014, 03:48 AM	#1
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	Mother Earth Rises Mother Earth: I've been neglected, disrespected, used as a lucrative vessel Polluted, congested, stripped of nutrients on a lunatics level I've been tested by science, questioned, subjected to violence I was hijacked by peasants who produce weapons on islands My beautiful features destroyed by their homosapien leisure Once a utopian kingdom, stead focus on freedoms seizure Now a dystopian waste land, barren, it's decline is apparent The modern day crime, a sign that we have lost our bearing Staring down the path of terrible places, narrow with hatred Cupid committed suicide with his own arrow just to escape it These shoulders can no longer take it, i fold under the weight I'm too old to be treated this way, the toll leaves me in dismay Forty Nights of flooding, you'll feel my cries until I dry to nothing An atmosphere full of blasphemy, You'll feel the wrath coming Natural catastrophes, clashing sea's, tsunami causing tragedies It's time the mother rises, secure the new horizon, birth new family

03-22-2014, 04:09 PM	#5
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	Damn feed of the year __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

03-22-2014, 10:43 AM	#3
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	Salutations, enjoyed the forceful entry of the language into the fray. As soon as it began it was clear that you know how to take advantage of a situation. It was an assault, the short rhyme schemes had a kind of statutory quality. The picture in of itself gives the feeling of rapelling or abseiling. The gun and the face form a sort of trapezium shape, and I think you identified and pinned down this construct. You really know how to play with and molest words to change the meaning of certain colloquialisms. The way you violated common writing conventions to make a serious point about the exploitation of the environment was excellent. Congratulations on the upload.