ill nik-A (7-2) vs Flossaurus (4-2) - Ill nika wins

Bender · 03-22-2014, 01:04 PM

I stay lookin fresh cuz I got fat pockets while urs are mere scrawny
If u Floss… then I’m shining so hard my gear comes with an Axe screaming “Here’s Johnny”!

vs

nothing that I was feeling

Nik your shit was decent, I didn't really get a few of the punches like the cum and defeet line but the first line was good and there was a few others that were pretty decent.

Floss your shit is way to simple it is just boring, make the punches more complex you are taking old concepts and using them in a way that is not all that effective, work on a set up and a punch to make it more effective

vote-Nik, although not the best verse better than Floss and the first bar was better than any he had.

03-22-2014, 01:04 PM	#7
Bender Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 264 Battle Record: 11-5 Rep Power: 146919	I stay lookin fresh cuz I got fat pockets while urs are mere scrawny If u Floss… then I’m shining so hard my gear comes with an Axe screaming “Here’s Johnny”! vs nothing that I was feeling Nik your shit was decent, I didn't really get a few of the punches like the cum and defeet line but the first line was good and there was a few others that were pretty decent. Floss your shit is way to simple it is just boring, make the punches more complex you are taking old concepts and using them in a way that is not all that effective, work on a set up and a punch to make it more effective vote-Nik, although not the best verse better than Floss and the first bar was better than any he had.