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Old 03-21-2014, 07:50 PM   #2
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I've seen times where I cried astute to the desolation,
The voices of Elysium calling me back to elation.
Shangri-La, Utopia, heaven, we're under,
Zion is attainable, but is the present the juncture?

this was pretty dope part

lot of good thoughts and was put together really well, especially with each stanza kinda standing on its own made it easy to read from each thought to the next.
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