AOWL Week 5: Innovator (2-2) VS. King Keith (1-1) OPEN FOR VOTES!!!

zygote · 03-17-2013, 04:28 AM

Innovator, good literal interpretation of the topic, put across your point that man is the cruelest animal. Used good analogies/metaphors that fit with this theme. E.g., the ending, "The king of the jungle" line, and "self-gluttony line". Also, the part in the middle was a great juxtaposition to break up the two paragraphs.

King Keith, really approve of your argument here. Basically, the same angle Innovator chose but you went one step further. Very persuasive writing, showing that not only are humans the cruelest animal but humans have a moral obligation to be better than that. It was emotionally strong and thought stimulating at the same time. Truly enjoyed reading it.

Voted for King Keith.

03-17-2013, 04:28 AM	#6
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	Innovator, good literal interpretation of the topic, put across your point that man is the cruelest animal. Used good analogies/metaphors that fit with this theme. E.g., the ending, "The king of the jungle" line, and "self-gluttony line". Also, the part in the middle was a great juxtaposition to break up the two paragraphs. King Keith, really approve of your argument here. Basically, the same angle Innovator chose but you went one step further. Very persuasive writing, showing that not only are humans the cruelest animal but humans have a moral obligation to be better than that. It was emotionally strong and thought stimulating at the same time. Truly enjoyed reading it. Voted for King Keith.