razor wayans damon blades: DEMENTIA

razor wayans damon blades · 03-19-2014, 02:31 PM

i’ll go. @dead man

bellowing. get a load of dementia’s exposure
developing. throwing salt, to the antithesis. slowly
over the anesthetist’s shoulder. syringes leave hickeys
1-on-1 with a gypsy. there’s whiskey in my whiskey
the fact of the matter is grizzly. bare with me, here
I swear by polar bears, that he’s such a bipolar. swear
poetic decay, is the most sensual way to erupt, tonic
say hello to my little friend, my scarred face tells one hell of a love sonnet
my captcha read “the end is near”, so i typed in ink “posthumous”
registered to a site about fear; except with a hint of post-modernist

go

dead man · 03-19-2014, 03:25 PM

oh hi this was gr8

more next time?

razor wayans damon blades · 03-19-2014, 03:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dead man

oh hi this was gr8

more next time?

absolutely!

PancakeBrah · 03-19-2014, 04:16 PM

Needs more autism

CopyPat · 03-20-2014, 03:00 AM

i concur, make this longer. this has mad potensh

razor wayans damon blades · 03-22-2014, 09:42 PM

thank you so much

Mael · 03-23-2014, 03:44 PM

Quote:

bellowing. get a load of dementia’s exposure
developing. throwing salt, to the antithesis. slowly

That made me chuckle a little. "Throwing salt, to the antithesis. Slowly". lol.. Yeah, this was short, but nevertheless a good read and show of rhythmic precision. Good job.

razor wayans damon blades · 03-26-2014, 10:42 AM

thanks!!

Objective · 03-26-2014, 05:19 PM

Short but dope. Agree with everyone saying that this should be longer.

my captcha read “the end is near”, so i typed in ink “posthumous”
^ Dope shit.

Looking forward to read from you.

03-19-2014, 02:31 PM	#1
razor wayans damon blades Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 43 Rep Power: 3501588	razor wayans damon blades: DEMENTIA i’ll go. @dead man bellowing. get a load of dementia’s exposure developing. throwing salt, to the antithesis. slowly over the anesthetist’s shoulder. syringes leave hickeys 1-on-1 with a gypsy. there’s whiskey in my whiskey the fact of the matter is grizzly. bare with me, here I swear by polar bears, that he’s such a bipolar. swear poetic decay, is the most sensual way to erupt, tonic say hello to my little friend, my scarred face tells one hell of a love sonnet my captcha read “the end is near”, so i typed in ink “posthumous” registered to a site about fear; except with a hint of post-modernist go

03-19-2014, 03:25 PM	#2
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,469 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	oh hi this was gr8 more next time? __________________ Zack Wicks for president

03-20-2014, 03:00 AM	#5
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742222	i concur, make this longer. this has mad potensh __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

03-26-2014, 05:19 PM	#9
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,795 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474189	Short but dope. Agree with everyone saying that this should be longer. my captcha read “the end is near”, so i typed in ink “posthumous” ^ Dope shit. Looking forward to read from you. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

03-19-2014, 04:16 PM	#4
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	Needs more autism

03-22-2014, 09:42 PM	#6
razor wayans damon blades Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 43 Rep Power: 3501588	thank you so much

03-26-2014, 10:42 AM	#8
razor wayans damon blades Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 43 Rep Power: 3501588	thanks!!