Week 3: Vividlyvague (1-1) vs. King Ra. (1-1) \\ Vividlyvague wins 9-4

YDK · 03-16-2014, 11:03 PM

This was a dope as battle forreal.
vivid you impressed with the creativity and imagery describing the video game while including more than one topic. The flow was decent but a few stretched/forced multies had me rereading once in a while. Solid drop tho I expected the ending pretty early on.
RA easily the closest to the take I was debating on this week. I guessed the ending about halfway through because its how I would have ended it lol flow an multies were on point but the emotion really brought me into this piece.
A very close battle but I gotta vote for the one I preferred and related to more which is RA.
Good shit fellas

03-16-2014, 11:03 PM	#11
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	This was a dope as battle forreal. vivid you impressed with the creativity and imagery describing the video game while including more than one topic. The flow was decent but a few stretched/forced multies had me rereading once in a while. Solid drop tho I expected the ending pretty early on. RA easily the closest to the take I was debating on this week. I guessed the ending about halfway through because its how I would have ended it lol flow an multies were on point but the emotion really brought me into this piece. A very close battle but I gotta vote for the one I preferred and related to more which is RA. Good shit fellas __________________