Shorebreaks (Thought Auditing pt. 2)

Vulgar · 03-15-2014, 12:16 PM

Effing sick.

but cradle your breath! there's hope if you can make the connection -
that there's zen in the helplessness beneath the weight of oppression
^Greetings, Yoda.

troubled kid, nowhere to fit, this ocean was my sedative
sanctuary for the ill at ease, my private leper settlement.
^Impacting.

the problem is I got more ideas than minutes
more ambitions to begin than I have reasons to finish
more horizons to explore than I have means to their limits
^Third line is very relatable.

You killed it with the whole last stanza. I feel like going to the beach now.

Keep doing you

03-15-2014, 12:16 PM	#8
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Effing sick. but cradle your breath! there's hope if you can make the connection - that there's zen in the helplessness beneath the weight of oppression ^Greetings, Yoda. troubled kid, nowhere to fit, this ocean was my sedative sanctuary for the ill at ease, my private leper settlement. ^Impacting. the problem is I got more ideas than minutes more ambitions to begin than I have reasons to finish more horizons to explore than I have means to their limits ^Third line is very relatable. You killed it with the whole last stanza. I feel like going to the beach now. Keep doing you